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Dark Enchantress
Senior Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 1258
meet Morgana

0 posted 2002-06-13 09:23 PM

Rabbit, rabbit, white
Rabbit – knocking on
My bedroom door,
Follow me, and follow
Me he says

I climb out of my old
Igloo with all of my
Tattoos and follow
Him, now Rabbit why
Have you taken me
Here? Mad Hatter dances
And he dances wearing
My perfume

I don’t think this
Will pass, Rabbit, you’ve
Brought me too far.
The king and the queen
Are hanging out at the
Local bar and they’re
Wondering, yes they’re
Wondering whether or not
To take off my head again

Just circles and circles
And falling again I said,
Circles and circles until
Finally I wake up in my
Bed, in my own bed
With no one waiting
In the kitchen for me to
Come out and bake
Cookies that are already
In them

Oh but Rabbits knocking
On my bedroom door,
Follow me, and follow
Me he says just once
More

6.13.02 – 9:15 p.m.

[Jaime]

"I think I would like to call myself 'the girl who wanted to be God'." Sylvia Plath

PoetryIsLife

Senior Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

1 posted 2002-06-13 10:37 PM

We've already discussed this piece in depth, but I wanted to pop my head in for a second, and say I love it. It's a deep as all your pieces are, but this one, I like a bit more. It's sweetness, memina.

Sincerely Yours,
SaVerite
(Titus)

Every second that passes you are one second older. You'll never get that second back.

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

2 posted 2002-06-14 12:25 PM

wow, i liked this, lol i dunno wut else 2 say but wow.

~¿Our lives are soap operas, no wonder so many people sit glued 2 the tv watching them.....¿~

songsoftheaftermath
Member

since 2002-06-19

Posts 84
a world of disarray

3 posted 2002-06-27 02:17 AM

arrgh i was just discussing how i found "alice in wonderland" as scary as hell when i was little with my boyfriend yesterday..and this reminded me of it again *shudders*
i love the way you use repetition in your poems...whenever i do that in my poems it seems as though im just stuttering..but you seem to pull it off really well.
i liked this- its a great mix of confusion and frustration...like being led in the dark by your toe by some psycho on speed.

youre a great writer...keep posting please.

could the darkness be my friend?

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