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xerxes
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since 2001-08-05
Posts 34


0 posted 2002-05-11 10:05 PM


What if I missed you and you got caught in the sun?
Who would find you and catch me on the run?
Uninspired promises and blame
I fell asleep somewhere in the rain
Beautifully stained.
Speeding through disagreements of dreams
Crashing into irreconcilable scenes.
Every hurt depends on a lonely feeling.
Rain through clouds of pride
Looking in from the outside
It’s the truth, even when I lie.
Waiting for every eternity just be let in
Where is a dream medicine?
Drugged by the cure of a goodbye
Questioning an answer to why.
Introduce the noise
Overdose on the exact amount of choice.
Contradicting my soul
Tricking heaven into welcoming me to a place I could belong
All these words spilled journeying from wrong.
Your eyes follow these lines, you see yourself somewhere lost in rhyme
Somewhere closer to hidden doors in your mind.
Maybe in deserts of truth and oceans of tears
I’ll find you swimming, searching for no fear
You may see me and call out, though I can never hear
And if they ask where I’ve gone
Tell them I was alone, but I’m traveling home.
-Xerxes

[This message has been edited by xerxes (05-11-2002 10:06 PM).]

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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665
Twilight Zone
1 posted 2002-05-14 09:56 AM


Wow, this is really good
I'm very impressed
Hope to see more in the future
Thanks for the excellent read

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.


Who iis she
Junior Member
since 2002-05-14
Posts 41
Some where over the rainbow
2 posted 2002-05-19 10:27 PM


Good Poem...

Τ׺·. .·º ËriÇ康. .·º×¤Î
"Its your body use it because someday your going to lose it"-Jeff hardy

songsoftheaftermath
Member
since 2002-06-19
Posts 84
a world of disarray
3 posted 2002-06-27 02:11 AM


"Looking in from the outside"
i know feeling like that all too well. i liked this a lot...thanks for posting it!

could the darkness be my friend?

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