Teen Poetry #5 |
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Love Her |
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cutiepiesugarbabie Member
since 2002-06-07
Posts 110A Cloud In the Sky |
She’s in a room. All by herself. Save her from the impending doom. She needs a way out. Somewhere she can run to No more time for doubt. Stop looking at her. Why do you stare? What do you see? I see a lost girl. All on her own. Screaming screams that make you hair curl. Please why won’t someone, anyone, Help her. The end has begun. Can’t you see, she’s reaching out Waiting to be accepted She’s done without. Now please. Just help her She’s on her knees. Why won’t someone love her? She’s trusting Why do they shun her? Is she different? No she is just like you and me. Put aside your indifferences Accept her with open arms. Love her. It will bring you no harm. |
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AngelShell Member
since 2000-03-01
Posts 446not heaven nor hell so... |
This was a good read. The ideas were vivid and real. Keep up the writing. ~I haven't memorized all of the cute things to say but I'm working on it~ |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Hmmmm very interesting poem I believe we should turn our backs on anyone as the saying goes "love your neighbors as you love me" thanks for sharing là où est mon amour? |
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songsoftheaftermath Member
since 2002-06-19
Posts 84a world of disarray |
i think acire said whatever he was trying to say all wrong ![]() ![]() i liked this poem....god knows ive felt like this. keep posting! could the darkness be my friend? |
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