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cutiepiesugarbabie
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since 2002-06-07
Posts 110
A Cloud In the Sky

0 posted 2002-06-11 02:18 PM


She’s in a room.
All by herself.
Save her from the impending doom.

She needs a way out.
Somewhere she can run to
No more time for doubt.

Stop looking at her.
Why do you stare?
What do you see?

I see a lost girl.
All on her own.
Screaming screams that make you hair curl.

Please why won’t someone, anyone,
Help her.
The end has begun.

Can’t you see, she’s reaching out
Waiting to be accepted
She’s done without.

Now please.
Just help her
She’s on her knees.

Why won’t someone love her?
She’s trusting
Why do they shun her?

Is she different?
No she is just like you and me.
Put aside your indifferences

Accept her with open arms.
Love her.
It will bring you no harm.


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AngelShell
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since 2000-03-01
Posts 446
not heaven nor hell so...
1 posted 2002-06-15 10:45 PM


This was a good read.
The ideas were vivid and real.
Keep up the writing.

~I haven't memorized all of the cute things to say but I'm working on it~

Acies
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Posts 7665
Twilight Zone
2 posted 2002-06-26 10:38 AM


Hmmmm very interesting poem
I believe we should turn our backs on anyone
as the saying goes "love your neighbors as you love me"
thanks for sharing

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.


songsoftheaftermath
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since 2002-06-19
Posts 84
a world of disarray
3 posted 2002-06-26 10:11 PM


i think acire said whatever he was trying to say all wrong that's what you get for being a fish

i liked this poem....god knows ive felt like this. keep posting!

could the darkness be my friend?

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