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Squirmy
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since 2002-06-26
Posts 5


0 posted 2002-06-26 05:40 AM



A trip through tinsel town,
The wandering of your mind,
Things that are beautiful,
Stars shining brightly, high up in the sky,
Oh, how much I miss you,
And I wish that you could see,
How quickly I’ve grown,
How quickly I’ll fade away,
This poem is my way,
Of expressing words I can not say,
Because words can not express
How I feel when you’re away
Flowers bloom,
Like the love I have for you
The stars burn out
But our love, it will never die
So if you love me,
Like you know I do to you,
Then we should be together,
And I’ll show you how I feel

© Copyright 2002 Squirmy - All Rights Reserved
fearing-laughter
Senior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)
1 posted 2002-06-26 05:45 AM


mr matt!
yay! you joined, and you posted! my matt refuses to post.  i like this...i was confused at first, but now i get it.  it's very nice.  i hope to see you post more cuz it will be fun fun.  tell danimonkey you posted too, i'm sure she'll wanna see.  well...keep posting, welcome to passions, and be happy!
-the spotted aardvark, druggie (not really) and ur sort of friend seeing how i don't really know you that well lol.
BeRgUnDy

maybe i'll catch fire, something nice to warm me. something pure to burn away the darkness, that hides inside my mind. -alkaline trio-

PurplePeopleEater
Junior Member
since 2002-01-04
Posts 11

2 posted 2002-06-26 09:48 PM


weee squirmy! this is dani...in case you were wondering. tis very pretty. bergy is a druggie lol. bye bye.
songsoftheaftermath
Member
since 2002-06-19
Posts 84
a world of disarray
3 posted 2002-06-26 09:59 PM


this is rather cute...and it conveys everything you need to say to the girl...nice write and welcome!

could the darkness be my friend?

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