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I want more of it
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SlowDrag Member
since 2002-01-10
Posts 53Tx...need i say more |
This song is more of a christian theme...it gives me comfort when i need it It's been one of those days... when i dont wanna wake up and i dont wanna look up... but nothing they can say.. can take me from your love.... i feel your hand... touching me... moving me.... i dont always understand... what you see in me... or how you move in me.. and i... dont deserve this love but i... want more of it and i... i've been moved by your spirit... and all i know... is i want more of it i'm sure there will be more later on....it's a work in progress. and all i wanna do is be there for the things you're going through....well is it good for you?...is it good for you? |
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cutiepiesugarbabie Member
since 2002-06-07
Posts 110A Cloud In the Sky |
looks good so far! keep up with the good writin! |
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cutiepiesugarbabie Member
since 2002-06-07
Posts 110A Cloud In the Sky |
looks good so far! keep up with the good writin! o*~Everyone makes mistakes at one time or another...what separates the weak from the strong is who can learn from them and continue one, then make dif |
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Neosaphire Junior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 20Oklahoma City |
It's all good, but ending bit is exceptionally excellent. Awesome last stanza. |
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