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CwboyAtHeart
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA

0 posted 2002-06-08 10:50 PM

Hello. I wrote this one earlier today. It's another one I wrote about... well, it's in first person, but the "Me" I wrote about isn't really ME... If u get what I'm saying. Anyway, let me know what you think.

WONT YOU LOVE ME?

Life's not easy for everybody
I spent my childhood all alone
Nobody knew how sad I was
My tears were never shown

My mother died when I was two
My father was rarely home
And when he'd be there long enough
I'd say, "Please Sir, won't you love me?"

As the time does, it slowly passed
And before I knew it I was grown
At eighteen I moved out of the house
Three years later, I called him on the phone

I said, "Dad, I've always loved you
And you're the one I'll always need
I've never really talked to you
But please sir, won't you love me?"

There was silence on the other end
Then in a quiet voice, I heard him say,
"You're the only son I've ever had...
I love you and I miss you every day."

      - Cody -

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ericaisamonkey
Member

since 2002-04-04

Posts 51
A little town north of nowhere

1 posted 2002-06-09 01:08 AM

oh my gosh cody...

that is a really nice poem. It's weird tho, cuz it's not written about you, but in a way it's written from your perspective of things. really really nice

i enjoyed it! keep up the great work!!! lotsa loves

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

2 posted 2002-06-09 07:27 PM

Awesome poem cody!! I loved the ending to the poem

Beautiful story!!!

Sometimes I get so weird
I even freak myself out
I laugh myself to sleep
It's my lullaby

aVriL lAvIgNe

chasing rain
Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 737
Canada

3 posted 2002-06-09 08:57 PM

Cody-

Lovely poem, very sentimental.

There was silence on the other end
Then in a quiet voice, I heard him say,
"You're the only son I've ever had...
I love you and I miss you every day."

That got me...woo, that got me. I really don't have much to say about this, except it was sad, but ended on a more...happy note. Thanks for the read!

Leah

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