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ericaisamonkey
Member

since 2002-04-04

Posts 51
A little town north of nowhere

0 posted 2002-06-08 07:16 PM

I haven't been on here for a while (if you haven't noticed). lol. This is one of my older poems, and i think it's kinda cool. I hope you like it as much as i do. I'm gonna try and post some of my newer stuff pretty soon, but i still have to critique some other people too... so ya know, tell me what you think.

*Expectations*
Touch me
Tease me
Hold me
Love me
Hate me
Break me
Hide me
Teach me
All lessons learned
Bite me
Kiss me
Need me
Want me
Cradle me
Torment me
A broken heart, not easily healed
Gentle understanding
From an insensitive man
Shelter me
Toss me
Lead me
Follow me
Warm me
And send a chill down my spine
Caress my hair
Flash your beautiful eyes
If only for a second
These are simply
My Expectations.

CwboyAtHeart
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA

1 posted 2002-06-08 07:42 PM

Interesting write here, Erica. I like it, though. Makes you think a little bit, cause if you don't, it's confusing. It's good to see ya post again.

      - Cody -

Note To Self:  If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?

Dark Enchantress
Senior Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 1258
meet Morgana

2 posted 2002-06-08 10:20 PM

I like it. I think it's important for us to know what we want. Relationships and such are hard enough without walking through it all blindly.

Thanks for posting. I enjoyed reading it.

[Jaime]

"I think I would like to call myself 'the girl who wanted to be God'." Sylvia Plath

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

3 posted 2002-06-09 07:25 PM

I really liked this one. I think this is what we all want maybe give or take a few things because everyone is different. I enjoyed this...thanks for sharing

Sometimes I get so weird
I even freak myself out
I laugh myself to sleep
It's my lullaby

aVriL lAvIgNe

Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

4 posted 2002-06-10 02:32 PM

this one hit close to home.
Good write!

Don't let your mind wander, it's much to small to be out by itself.

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