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Teen Poetry #5

Burning

cutiepiesugarbabie
Member

since 2002-06-07

Posts 110
A Cloud In the Sky

0 posted 2002-06-08 03:56 PM

I saw your face across the room
In an instant i knew it was you
I was destined to be with
In an instant i knew what to do

Without thinking I made my way
To you, where you were
Without thinking that day
To you I ran, what a mistake

Now here we are
Together
Now were do we go from here?
Together?

No, don't touch me
Please it burns
From the inside out, i don't want you to see
Please turn away from my tears

This time together
Has been fun
This time togther
Has been hard

Time to go our separte ways
Leave me now, don't stay.

ericaisamonkey
Member

since 2002-04-04

Posts 51
A little town north of nowhere

1 posted 2002-06-09 01:24 AM

wow, sounds like something i'm sure we've all gone through. its a beautiful poem

lol. You did a wonderful job on it. i'll be looking for more of your stuff, you've got some talent.

:rolling:*~Erica~*:rolling:

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2002-06-10 08:58 PM

Seems like a trying time right now for you. Good luck with the situation at hand, and I thought you wrote a heart felt piece. We've all been there, or at least experienced a bit of what this poem is talking about.