Teen Poetry #5 |
YESSSS I JUST MADE MY FIRST CD...here's one song |
SlowDrag Member
since 2002-01-10
Posts 53Tx...need i say more |
I'm proud to announce that my band...Idiot Box (dont ask)....just recorded our first cd....it took a lotta time and money but it's done ....it's called "a ride on the short bus"....here's the first song on it (not to mention the first song i ever wrote...) it's punk.......if you want me to send you the recorded cd version in mp3 format email me at dr_pepsi13@yahoo.com ... i can send it through msn yahoo or aol instant messengers....hah i recommend it...i want people to hear our music. anyhow here's the words... this song is kinda recorded making fun of happy punk bands like blink 182...it's in that style btw. The First Date. Iron my shirt put gel in my hair run in circles dont know what to wear ask my mom if i can borrow the car... spin over to south blvd. Chorus: asked her out now it's our first date... so nervous now... i just can't wait... anxiety building up in my mind... grab my cologne running out of time... picked her up and drove her down town started to yawn so i looked around... couldn't think of anything to do... stomache ache makes my face turn blue Chorus: asked her out now it's our first date... so nervous now... i just can't wait... anxiety building up in my mind... grab my Big Red i'm running out of time... Bridge: I'll never grow up.. i'll never show up... i'll never be on time...(2x) Chorus: took her home... walked her to the door.. held my breath hoping for a little more... leaned over... kissed me on the cheek i said "hey baby.. i'll see you in another week" and all i wanna do is be there for the things you're going through....well is it good for you?...is it good for you? |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Dude, I love it. I love it man, love it. The lyrics fit the style perfectly. Do you think I could get a copy of your cd? The first few verses could use some work, to be honest. But the chorus(s) and bridge are tight. Sincerely, Titus Every second that passes you are one second older. You'll never get that second back. |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA |
I like it. It totally works w/the style that it's in. Has a nice flow to it, great job. Good luck w/ur band! - Cody - |
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