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cutiepiesugarbabie
Member

since 2002-06-07

Posts 110
A Cloud In the Sky

0 posted 2002-06-07 09:49 PM

We used to be friends
Together everyday
Fun without end
What happened?

You abandoned me
Left me alone
What you had to see
Is if i could survive with out you?

I did, I have
Better than I?
You think but
Your not, I

I am the only one
who can put myself down
who can truly aprciate myself
Upon me don't frown

'cause even if you think
for one second-
you'rebetter than the rest
you're wrong, life is a test

And you've failed.

I don't usualy rhyme my poems...and i wrote this spur-of-the-moment, no editing...so bear with me here!

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

1 posted 2002-06-08 03:17 AM

I like it.

WELCOME TO PASSIONS

A true friend will never abandon you...I'm glad that you realize that you are strong enough to move on without that person in your life! Remember, when you find a true friend, cherish them, because true friends are a gift.

Encarta
Member

since 2002-02-14

Posts 101
My homeland is not of the world

2 posted 2002-06-08 12:17 PM

Great poem. It's so true
my favorite part was...
'cause even if you think
for one second-
you'rebetter than the rest
you're wrong, life is a test

And you've failed.

It's so true. What a great poem

I look forward to reading more from you

cutiepiesugarbabie
Member

since 2002-06-07

Posts 110
A Cloud In the Sky

3 posted 2002-06-08 03:40 PM

Hey Thanks you guys, everyone here is so nice!

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

4 posted 2002-06-09 07:19 PM

Welcome to passions!!!

"friends" like these you definately dont need taking up space in your life!! Ur betta off without her Cant wait to read more poems from you!

P.S.- Please check your e-mail for a special greeting!

Sometimes I get so weird
I even freak myself out
I laugh myself to sleep
It's my lullaby

aVriL lAvIgNe

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2002-06-10 06:02 PM

Welcome to your new home. I thought you did mighty well on this first poem of yours. I look forward to see more of your poetry.

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Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

6 posted 2002-06-10 09:43 PM

"I did, I have
Better than I?
You think but
Your not, I"

First off, that stanza threw me a bit, but the more I think about it, the more it makes sense. Secondly, welcome to Passions! I hope to read more from you!

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

7 posted 2002-06-12 09:39 AM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!

You don't usually rhyme?
Well, you should start now, cause this is really good
I don't rhyme either, but I've learned to in Passions
and it's pretty neat if I may say
Again, welcome to passions, hope you have fun
Thanks for sharing and waiting for more to come

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.

cutiepiesugarbabie
Member

since 2002-06-07

Posts 110
A Cloud In the Sky

8 posted 2002-06-25 05:20 PM

thanks for all your replies guys

o*~Everyone makes mistakes-get over them and make more tomorrow!~*o

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