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SunShine913

Member

since 2001-08-19

Posts 211
Italy but from NC

0 posted 2002-06-06 06:08 PM

kiss as soft
as spring time flowers,
As sweet
as summer showers

Is not practical
Yet, it's magical
A gentle embrace
Upon my face
You hold my heart...
until our lips part

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Hey you guys.. well the ones that remember me.. Guess what im back hehe this time for good

*!~!* Andrea *!~!*

CwboyAtHeart
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA

1 posted 2002-06-06 07:30 PM

ANDREA!!!! -runs over and gives you a big hug- I've missed you! Where have you been?

Anywho... I liked this poem, short and simple, yet very good. I enjoyed it.

      - Cody -

Note To Self:  If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2002-06-06 07:34 PM

I liked this one a lot, and welcome back. I liked the poem and hope to see more.

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MidnightSon
Member

since 2002-05-15

Posts 312
between the gutter & the stars

3 posted 2002-06-06 09:49 PM

oo... this feels like nighttime on the fourth of july.
vivid...great, short write.
thanks for the memories.

oh and btw... cool handle. very no-nonsense.

"The soul is oftentimes a battlefield where reason and judgement wage war on passion and appetite."

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

4 posted 2002-06-07 02:01 AM

Welcome back! Great write!

Mon Cherie

Senior Member

since 2001-10-31

Posts 922
Land of Never-ending Summers

5 posted 2002-06-07 09:53 AM

Welcome back Andrea!!!!
This is so sweet, but I think this is so loving that your heart is held, even after your lips are apart.

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

Jenn Cirrincione

Member Elite

since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

6 posted 2002-06-07 01:55 PM

Of course I remember you!
Welcome back my dear.
Short, simply sweet poem- I liked it.

Jenn

Why is it that we are at our most ingenius only when trying to destroy the things that keep us alive and thriving?

ericaisamonkey
Member

since 2002-04-04

Posts 51
A little town north of nowhere

7 posted 2002-06-08 07:52 PM

Hi! Lemme introduce myself. I'm erica, and I'm under impression you're andrea? lol. I'm a newer member, but this was a really nice poem... brought back some memories... tee hee hee. lol

nice job, I'll be looking for more of your stuff

*Erica*

SunShine913

Member

since 2001-08-19

Posts 211
Italy but from NC

8 posted 2002-06-09 02:49 AM

HEHE it is great to be back you guys~!

*!~!* Andrea *!~!*

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