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SunShine913
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0 posted 2002-06-06 06:08 PM



kiss as soft
as spring time flowers,
As sweet
as summer showers

Is not practical
Yet, it's magical
A gentle embrace
Upon my face
You hold my heart...
until our lips part

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Hey you guys.. well the ones that remember me.. Guess what im back hehe this time for good

            *!~!* Andrea *!~!*    

© Copyright 2002 Andrea L. Figueroa - All Rights Reserved
CwboyAtHeart
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1 posted 2002-06-06 07:30 PM


ANDREA!!!!  -runs over and gives you a big hug-  I've missed you!  Where have you been?

Anywho...  I liked this poem, short and simple, yet very good.  I enjoyed it.  

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2 posted 2002-06-06 07:34 PM


I liked this one a lot, and welcome back. I liked the poem and hope to see more.

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MidnightSon
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3 posted 2002-06-06 09:49 PM


oo... this feels like nighttime on the fourth of july.
vivid...great, short write.
thanks for the memories.

oh and btw... cool handle. very no-nonsense.

"The soul is oftentimes a battlefield where reason and judgement wage war on passion and appetite."

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4 posted 2002-06-07 02:01 AM


Welcome back! Great write!
Mon Cherie
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5 posted 2002-06-07 09:53 AM


Welcome back Andrea!!!!
This is so sweet, but I think this is so loving that your heart is held, even after your lips are apart.

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

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6 posted 2002-06-07 01:55 PM


Of course I remember you!
Welcome back my dear.
Short, simply sweet poem- I liked it.

Jenn

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ericaisamonkey
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7 posted 2002-06-08 07:52 PM


Hi! Lemme introduce myself.  I'm erica, and I'm under impression you're andrea? lol. I'm a newer member, but this was a really nice poem... brought back some memories... tee hee hee. lol nice job, I'll be looking for more of your stuff

*Erica*

SunShine913
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8 posted 2002-06-09 02:49 AM


HEHE it is great to be back you guys~!

            *!~!* Andrea *!~!*    

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