Teen Poetry #5 |
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Thats Life |
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since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Thats Life It's amazing how little you can see, WHats going on in others minds. The hate, love, fear and sadness, That occurs millions upon millions of times. Bet you dont know what im thinking, No and you wouldnt want to. It would be too harsh, Well, unless you've experienced what i've been through. So you want to know what? Im sick of your assumptions of who i am. Picking me apart with your beaty little eyes, God, you could atleast cover it up and pretend. Dont bother digging deep, What you might find could blind you. Amaze you with astonishment, Overcome you and possibly devour you. So dont bother trying to figure me out, Your just waisting your time. Leave me alone, Because your also waisting mine. Sometimes I get so weird |
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MidnightSon Member
since 2002-05-15
Posts 312between the gutter & the stars |
someone's sig in here reads "open arms can be the most fragile" and i think this poem reflects that kind of pain. closing off is never the answer. someone somewhere has walked a similar path. we're here for ya. raw and excellent write. "The soul is oftentimes a battlefield where reason and judgement wage war on passion and appetite." |
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Allysa![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
This IS life. I know what it's like to close off. There's one person, one, who wants me to be "open" and I can't. Open arms are the most fragile. They make me wary because you never know when they'll break. Great write, dearie! |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
Hey, it's been awhile. I haven't been able to come around lately but I'm obviously missing some good poetry. Just thought I'd stop in and say hi. I'm gonna try and come back around more often. Great poem. Jon "Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur |
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