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0 posted 2002-06-03 11:12 PM



Thats Life

It's amazing how little you can see,
WHats going on in others minds.
The hate, love, fear and sadness,
That occurs millions upon millions of times.
Bet you dont know what im thinking,
No and you wouldnt want to.
It would be too harsh,
Well, unless you've experienced what i've been through.
So you want to know what?
Im sick of your assumptions of who i am.
Picking me apart with your beaty little eyes,
God, you could atleast cover it up and pretend.
Dont bother digging deep,
What you might find could blind you.
Amaze you with astonishment,
Overcome you and possibly devour you.
So dont bother trying to figure me out,
Your just waisting your time.
Leave me alone,
Because your also waisting mine.

Sometimes I get so weird
I even freak myself out
I laugh myself to sleep
It's my lullaby

aVriL lAvIgNe

© Copyright 2002 Michele - All Rights Reserved
MidnightSon
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1 posted 2002-06-03 11:26 PM


someone's sig in here reads "open arms can be the most fragile" and i think this poem reflects that kind of pain.

closing off is never the answer. someone somewhere has walked a similar path. we're here for ya.

raw and excellent write.

"The soul is oftentimes a battlefield where reason and judgement wage war on passion and appetite."

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2 posted 2002-06-04 08:05 PM


This IS life.
I know what it's like to close off.
There's one person, one, who wants me to be "open" and I can't.
Open arms are the most fragile.
They make me wary because you never know when they'll break.
Great write, dearie!

keoni
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3 posted 2002-06-05 07:04 PM


Hey, it's been awhile. I haven't been able to come around lately but I'm obviously missing some good poetry. Just thought I'd stop in and say hi. I'm gonna try and come back around more often. Great poem.
Jon

"Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur
"Sometimes it takes a painful loss to realize you are free"- Bouncing Souls

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