Teen Poetry #5 |
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Just Once |
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Baby_Angel123 Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 63Unity, ME ![]() |
Just Once For once in my life, I would like to be me, a teenager allowed to be free. Not kept from all, nor kept in closed, but free, and open, for all to see. Just let me be, and stop the hurting, pain, and tears, but most of all, stop the fear. For all I want is to be, someone else, someone who's happy, unlike me. |
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vipersumo Junior Member
since 2002-05-17
Posts 10 |
i like this a lot...it sounds like how i have been feeling lately...well done. |
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Cinderelly Member
since 2001-12-31
Posts 189NM, USA |
This is a really good poem . . . It's a lot like angel_2401's A Lonely Realazation. Life is a moderately good play w/ a badly written thrid act. - Unknown |
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vixengrl04 Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 495East Haddam, CT |
Wow, that definitely sounds like something I would write!! I can totally relate to how you're feeling because I feel the same way- every day. I hope that things get better, and keep on writing! ![]() Nikki *~Fighting for your love~* |
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Devils Angel 666 Member
since 2001-11-30
Posts 71CT, USA |
Hey Babe, Nice poem dear. Haven't been on here in a while and it was nice for you to tell me that you posted this time! I need to start writing some and post them again. I see were back to writing more of these poems again. Oh well they are all good anyway!!! I love you Dearly!! ttys!! Love you Always~ Dan |
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Allysa![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
I definatly know how this feels.... |
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