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Baby_Angel123
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since 2001-10-12
Posts 63
Unity, ME

0 posted 2002-06-03 07:45 PM



Just Once

For once in my life,
I would like to be me,
a teenager allowed to be free.

Not kept from all,
nor kept in closed,
but free,
and open,
for all to see.

Just let me be,
and stop the hurting, pain,
and tears,
but most of all,
stop the fear.

For all I want is to be,
someone else,
someone who's happy,
unlike me.



© Copyright 2002 Heather - All Rights Reserved
vipersumo
Junior Member
since 2002-05-17
Posts 10

1 posted 2002-06-03 08:16 PM


i like this a lot...it sounds like how i have been feeling lately...well done.
Cinderelly
Member
since 2001-12-31
Posts 189
NM, USA
2 posted 2002-06-04 02:03 AM


This is a really good poem . . . It's a lot like angel_2401's A Lonely Realazation.

Life is a moderately good play w/ a badly written thrid act. - Unknown

vixengrl04
Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 495
East Haddam, CT
3 posted 2002-06-04 10:00 AM


Wow, that definitely sounds like something I would write!! I can totally relate to how you're feeling because I feel the same way- every day.  I hope that things get better, and keep on writing!

Nikki

     *~Fighting for your love~*
    *~Is something I cannot do~*
   *~I'm not good enough to win~*
*~And I'm not strong enough to lose~*

Devils Angel 666
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since 2001-11-30
Posts 71
CT, USA
4 posted 2002-06-04 07:51 PM


Hey Babe,
    Nice poem dear.  Haven't been on here in a while and it was nice for you to tell me that you posted this time!  I need to start writing some and post them again.  I see were back to writing more of these poems again.  Oh well they are all good anyway!!!
I love you Dearly!!
ttys!!
Love you Always~
Dan

Allysa
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In an upside-down garden
5 posted 2002-06-04 07:59 PM


I definatly know how this feels....
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