Teen Poetry #5 |
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fearing-laughter Senior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 605land of cheese (Wisconsin) |
hey. i was reading all my posts over, and i realized they all pretty much had one thing in common: they're all way too depressing! so here is kind of a change for me..a happy post, yay! i hope you like it, and be happy of course. -bergundy- smile slowly as you watch the sun rise dance gracefully in front of your bedroom mirror write crazy love poems about the person you think is finally "the one" return hate's one fingered salute and learn to laugh instead of constantly crying forget how to sigh and stop letting your life pass you by -bergundy- maybe i'll catch fire, something nice to warm me. something pure to burn away the darkness, that hides inside my mind. -alkaline trio- |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
You've created a wonderful image i liked this a lot!! Thanks for sharing and it was nice to see you post a happier poem! iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf.. |
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Demonic Illusion Member
since 2002-02-07
Posts 50 |
hows it goin? glad i read that i needed somethin happy today it was very good =o) Demonic Illusions, Frostic Dragons, Bloody Tears From Me To You....all surround by a force of Untouchable Darkness |
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twitchy New Member
since 2002-05-29
Posts 4 |
another great poem by berg...i swear every one of yours i have ever had the pleasure of reading has been great...even if it was a pissed off at matt one. well..im talking to you right now so gnight. (naked smilies are the sh*t) [This message has been edited by twitchy (05-29-2002 01:52 AM).] |
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Cinderelly Member
since 2001-12-31
Posts 189NM, USA |
This is such a cool expressive poem! Life is a moderately good play w/ a badly written thrid act. - Unknown |
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blakloks Member
since 2002-06-01
Posts 60 |
hey this is cool! i liked it! this totally uplifts the person reading it. if only i could writie like this.... |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Hmmm... happy is nice. Not enough happiness on these pages, nice alternative. Jenn Why is it that we are at our most ingenius only when trying to destroy the things that keep us alive and thriving? |
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Xaphan Junior Member
since 2002-05-29
Posts 22 |
Yes, there is a more than a fair share of depressing posts here. I personally post towards the depressed side, because frankly, I'm not all that happy these days. Too many jerks in my life, and negligable hope LOL But your post is uplifting all the same. If we live in darkness, without ever seeing light, the next time light comes around it will hurt our eyes. Keep it up |
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