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inspiredpoetwriter Member
since 2002-01-05
Posts 104Minnesota |
Hey! Every1 plz tell me what u honestly thought of this poem emailme back about it plz. ~Thanks~ Ask Your Self 5/30/2002 Sometime in the night you Awake & ask your self When is somebody going to Stand at your side? Some where in your mind You ask your self your self to find somebody Who might help you through Your troubled times. Something hurts inside your heart You ask you self what it is all you Feel is the emptiness Inside. Sometime in the morning When the sun comes to rise You ask your self how come Time wont move slow? Somewhere in the tears You’ve cried you ask your Self why do I have to be So alone so sad? Something crushes you down To the pavement ripping apart your Skin to bleed you ask your self Why’d this happen to me? Sometime in the breeze you Hear the voices tell You cruel things you ask Your self what you did so wrong? -Ang- ¥¤¥¤¥¥¤¥¤¥iM a PoEt WhO wRiTeZ Wit HeR Heart ¥¤¥¤¥¥¤¥¤¥ |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Thank you for sharing this. I really feel for this.  Something hurts inside your heart You ask you self what it is all you Feel is the emptiness Inside. Somewhere in the tears You’ve cried you ask your Self why do I have to be So alone so sad? I guess we need to feel ourselves in love with other people to fill up this emptiness. Sometimes it is not a void that can be filled by companionship, you just need a special person. Yet, in life, we need to learn how to nurture ourselves in solitude. Being alone doesn't necessarily equate to being lonely. Sometimes we need to grow alone. Sometime in the morning When the sun comes to rise You ask your self how come Time wont move slow? Yes, I always ask myself this question. When I am busy all day long, how I wish time would go slower at night... the few precious hours I have at night for me to catch up with my family, and to watch tv. The few precious hours that usually gets eaten up by the need to sleep which comes from the fatigue of working the whole day. *sigh* vicious cycle...  _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well put...I liked the poem. Hope to see more!  This message has been brought to you by the letter 'Y' |
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