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Dunphy
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since 2002-03-14
Posts 82
Massachusetts USA

0 posted 2002-05-29 01:30 PM


life like unda tha city muss b feelin pitty
livin day by day wunderin wutt will come their way.
now ta god they shall pray to see wutt he hass ta say.
they juss wanna nice crib
ya know they'll like this.
they juss need a little cash
why do peeps tawk like trash?
they wunda why
haven't they juss die.
alotta thoes peeps awl they do is cry
an they ask tha lawd i wunda why.
what's gonna happin if i don't try
an they say ohh my my.
you know it's in my eye
then someday i'll have a surprise.

frum dunphy
aka scooby

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Elizabeth
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1 posted 2002-05-29 07:06 PM


Dunphy, I'm unclear as to why this is posted in Announcements. Would you like it moved to a poetry forum? Please let me know.

Elizabeth

God bless America, my home sweet home.

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2 posted 2002-06-10 11:44 PM


Once again, the language was used well.
Enjoyed.

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