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0 posted 2002-05-30 07:34 PM


I wrote this one to a friend who I met over the internet. I write alot of songs with her and talk about music stuff. But she got dumbed by her boy. And is in this "weird/bad/sad" place right now. and I felt that I had to write something. So I did.

So what do you think?

Best Wishes,

Brian.


"Shauna Smiling"
© 2002 Brian Eggertsen, All Rights Reserved

Chorus:
Shauna Smiling (x4)

Verse 1:
Where did the girl go
Who used ti fill me in,
On her life from time to time?
Who used to laugh and grin?

Verse 2:
Where did the girl go
Who wrote the kinda songs,
Everyone could relate to?
Who made me smile along?

Chorus:
Shauna Smiling (x4)

Verse 3:
Where did the girl go
Who smiled, enjoyed herself,
Just like any other teen?
Take her down from shelf!

Bridge:
It's such a shame you're caught in the rain!
Because then the world won't see you smile!
Dust her off and put her on again...

Chorus:
Shauna Smiling (Til Fade)

© Copyright 2002 Brian Eggertsen - All Rights Reserved
Mon Cherie
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1 posted 2002-05-31 11:28 AM


WELL DONE!!!!!
REALLY well done! I really love it!!

Let's hope Shauna keeps her smile on always.

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

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2 posted 2002-06-10 11:53 PM


I liked it a lot....sounds like it'd be a nice pop song.

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