Teen Poetry #5 |
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Shauna Smiling :) |
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since 2001-03-18
Posts 419 |
I wrote this one to a friend who I met over the internet. I write alot of songs with her and talk about music stuff. But she got dumbed by her boy. And is in this "weird/bad/sad" place right now. and I felt that I had to write something. So I did. So what do you think? Best Wishes, Brian. "Shauna Smiling" © 2002 Brian Eggertsen, All Rights Reserved Chorus: Shauna Smiling (x4) Verse 1: Where did the girl go Who used ti fill me in, On her life from time to time? Who used to laugh and grin? Verse 2: Where did the girl go Who wrote the kinda songs, Everyone could relate to? Who made me smile along? Chorus: Shauna Smiling (x4) Verse 3: Where did the girl go Who smiled, enjoyed herself, Just like any other teen? Take her down from shelf! Bridge: It's such a shame you're caught in the rain! Because then the world won't see you smile! Dust her off and put her on again... Chorus: Shauna Smiling (Til Fade) |
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Mon Cherie![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
WELL DONE!!!!! ![]() REALLY well done! I really love it!! Let's hope Shauna keeps her smile on always. ![]() _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I liked it a lot....sounds like it'd be a nice pop song. ![]() This message has been brought to you by the letter 'Y' |
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