Teen Poetry #5 |
Looking at you! |
Le Capitan de L'Amour Member
since 2000-07-15
Posts 60 |
As I look at you I think if you and I, but at the same time I think “but how?”, and as I miss the opportunity of been with you I think, but why to look and not to touch!, as god has given us this senses, is like to look and not to taste, is like a torture been without love in life, like been without your sweet slow kisses that makes me want to live another day for you and for the sweet love that life offers, as I miss this opportunity of been with you I look at you and say “why to have all senses, if the only one I need is the one of your love”. |
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since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This was a really sweet poem...nicely done! iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf.. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I thought this was sweet...well done...looking forward to more. This message has been brought to you by the letter 'Y' |
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