Teen Poetry #5 |
I Found You |
inspiredpoetwriter Member
since 2002-01-05
Posts 104Minnesota |
Title: I Found You I found you Hiding under my Bed. I found you Waiting to hold My hand. I found you Talking sweet things Behind my Back. I found you wanting to embrace Me in your arms. I found ou with a smile that Lights up the sky. I found you leaving a smiple Rose on my pillow. I found you Kissing me here Tonight. I found you Needing me in your Life. I found you To care when Nobody else would. I found you Letting me rest on your Shoulder. I found you Giving me guidence When things went bad. I found you An note you wrote that told me to Smile. I found you Been the brightest Star in my sky. I found you The one person who Loved all along. By: *~Ang~* ¥¤¥¤¥¥¤¥¤¥iM a PoEt WhO wRiTeZ Wit HeR Heart ¥¤¥¤¥¥¤¥¤¥ |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This was simple and beautifully written. Very well done Liked it a lot...thanks for sharing! Sometimes I get so weird |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Simple, short, and very sweet. Looking forward to more. Jenn Why is it that we are at our most ingenius only when trying to destroy the things that keep us alive and thriving? |
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Xaphan Junior Member
since 2002-05-29
Posts 22 |
Awwww Oh so cute and sweet. Reminds me so much of how I felt when I was with my first love. It's also simple, which is a good thing. Sometimes I, and probably lots of other people, make a habit of making things more complicated than they have to be. Sometimes you can say more with short sentences than you ever could with fifty 5-line paragraphs |
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