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inspiredpoetwriter
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since 2002-01-05
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0 posted 2002-06-01 08:36 PM


Title: I Found You



I found you
Hiding under my
Bed.

I found you
Waiting to hold
My hand.

I found you
Talking sweet things
Behind my
Back.

I found you
wanting to embrace
Me in your arms.

I found ou
with a smile that
Lights up the sky.

I found you
leaving a smiple
Rose on my pillow.

I found you
Kissing me here
Tonight.

I found you
Needing me in your
Life.

I found you
To care when
Nobody else would.

I found you
Letting me rest on your
Shoulder.

I found you
Giving me guidence
When things went bad.

I found you
An note you wrote
that told me to
Smile.

I found you
Been the brightest
Star in my sky.

I found you
The one person who
Loved all along.

By: *~Ang~*

¥¤¥¤¥¥¤¥¤¥iM a PoEt WhO wRiTeZ Wit HeR Heart ¥¤¥¤¥¥¤¥¤¥

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1 posted 2002-06-02 12:06 PM


This was simple and beautifully written. Very well done Liked it a lot...thanks for sharing!

Sometimes I get so weird
I even freak myself out
I laugh myself to sleep
It's my lullaby

aVriL lAvIgNe

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2 posted 2002-06-02 07:37 AM


Simple, short, and very sweet.
Looking forward to more.

Jenn

Why is it that we are at our most ingenius only when trying to destroy the things that keep us alive and thriving?

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3 posted 2002-06-03 02:33 PM


Awwww Oh so cute and sweet. Reminds me so much of how I felt when I was with my first love. It's also simple, which is a good thing. Sometimes I, and probably lots of other people, make a habit of making things more complicated than they have to be. Sometimes you can say more with short sentences than you ever could with fifty 5-line paragraphs
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