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Who iis she Junior Member
since 2002-05-14
Posts 41Some where over the rainbow |
With anorexic images of bodies destroyed from diets to pills, to throwing up till it kills. Continual fake, definition of what sells, ten pounds thinner Miss America winner. must be queen Must be seen as #1 thin as can be I cant stand my body Ribs stick 4 Inchs Looks like your body pinchs Your bones are more seen thenyour skin 60 Pounds I am so fat cant stand it thin as be why cant you see You smoke a Cigarettes Fight for world peice STarve your selfand throw up if you eat. You are so weak you cant even stand Black is the color is the theme You will be seen in a black little box You are dead Nothing said 60 pounds you weigh 14 years old they say No more Kathy. Τ׺·. .·º ËriÇ康. .·º×¤Î |
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devil_tongue Member
since 2000-03-02
Posts 50 |
Make sure you don't confuse anorexia with bulimia. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
a decent write laced with social consciousness...i think that regardless of whether you are fat or thin, healthy's definitely the state to go for..health is most important, yup?  |
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Who iis she Junior Member
since 2002-05-14
Posts 41Some where over the rainbow |
Thanks guys! And i know the Difference between Anorixia and Bulmic.My friend was both she never eat but when she did she threw up after it. Τ׺·. .·º ËriÇ康. .·º×¤Î |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
er, i hope your friend has recovered... |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
You wrote of such a sad and horrible thing that so many girls go through, i being one of them. I hope your friend has recovered as well...it really is no way to live life. Good poem....well done iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf.. |
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fearing-laughter Senior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 605land of cheese (Wisconsin) |
hey, this was a sad poem...but it had great flow. i am sorry if i can't think of anything else profound to say. i am kind of disgusted by devil_tongue's cruelness. your friend died a tragic death, and they are just worried about the medical definitions of the two diseases. anyway.... i am sorry for your loss, however the poem was well written. thank you for sharing. -bergundy- maybe i'll catch fire, something nice to warm me. something pure to burn away the darkness, that hides inside my mind. -alkaline trio- |
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Who iis she Junior Member
since 2002-05-14
Posts 41Some where over the rainbow |
Awww Thanks so much..You are really kind and i really think alot on what you have to say so thanks. Τ׺·. .·º ËriÇ康. .·º×¤Î |
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blakloks Member
since 2002-06-01
Posts 60 |
hey great poem. it was realli sad though. |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Interesting.. and since I'm on the "stop denying..." etc campaign, I'm anorexic. Woohoo. Isn't that fun to know? lol Bel |
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angel_2401 Member
since 2001-06-12
Posts 131Cincinnati, OH |
This poem.. has hit me at home. I used to be anorexic. It's not fun at all. I'm just now getting back to the stable weight of 110 over the span of three years. I recommend that you don't go into anorexia or other eating disorders. They're not fun. Kristin |
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MidnightSon Member
since 2002-05-15
Posts 312between the gutter & the stars |
emotional write... enjoyed the interesting rhythm of it. and i'm not sure if this was a visual poem... but it does work as one... getting thinner as it goes... great work "The soul is oftentimes a battlefield where reason and judgement wage war on passion and appetite." |
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ShortSexyAngelOnEarth Junior Member
since 2001-12-24
Posts 36im a louisiana cajun princess! lol |
good write...... kinda made me hurt to know that thats how i used to be, and made me want to cry. i was 5,0 tall, and 70 pounds, and that was a year ago. im now 5,2 and 110 pounds. which is really amazing recovery for me, even though i still dont eat as much as i should. anyways, it was really good, it hit home, keep up the good work. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Oh wow.....this poem is so sad. I felt it. It really hit me. Powerful poem. Very very powerful. Quiero mas.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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cutiepiesugarbabie Member
since 2002-06-07
Posts 110A Cloud In the Sky |
I loved you poem, such an important topic. I myself often feel fat even though people tell me im not and i do worry about some of my friends, great poem! |
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ericaisamonkey Member
since 2002-04-04
Posts 51A little town north of nowhere |
Hey, that was a really nice poem. Although not a lot of people really understand WHY people become anorexic, or bulimic. There was a 2 year space in my life where I was anorexic myself. A lot of people want to blame the media and stuff but it's not always like that. The whole reason for my anorexia was because I was raped from the time i was 6 until i was 11, and then at 12 I was molested by my best friends dad. I was disgusted with myself. It wasn't that the media made me feel fat, but it was because i wanted a new image. so i stopped eating. and for two years i lived on very little food. i was 125lbs, and i went from that to 98. I've been eating for a good year now, and i'm only 108. I can't gain weight anymore. But anyways, i'm sure you didn't want my life story. lol, but this was a great poem, and almost the way it goes. there are a few things that only someone who had been there could describe, but you did an excellent job of describing it from a friends experience. nice write! *Erica* |
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