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Cinderelly
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since 2001-12-31

Posts 189
NM, USA

0 posted 2002-06-07 01:20 AM

Take me out to try again,
take me out tonight,
buy me some hope and confidence,
I don’t care if there’s something to be lacked,
because it’s root root root for this time around,
And if it’s not right, that’s a shame,
For it’s one, two, three strikes,
We’re through in this old tired game.

© Copyright 2002 Jamie - All Rights Reserved

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1 posted 2002-06-07 02:03 PM

LOL
interesting...

Why is it that we are at our most ingenius only when trying to destroy the things that keep us alive and thriving?

Encarta
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since 2002-02-14

Posts 101
My homeland is not of the world

2 posted 2002-06-07 06:36 PM

lol, nice poem

all so very true, and interesting theam

MidnightSon
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since 2002-05-15

Posts 312
between the gutter & the stars

3 posted 2002-06-07 10:31 PM

i read it twice. once straight through, then again to the tune...very nice.

three strikes? you're a trusting one.....

"The soul is oftentimes a battlefield where reason and judgement wage war on passion and appetite."

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