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fairy girl
Junior Member

since 2001-07-14

Posts 10
*~*Virginia*~*

0 posted 2001-07-15 01:48 PM

what do you mean?

what do you really mean when you say i love you
do you really mean it or are you just saying it because i do

what do you really mean when you say you're the only one for me
are you really being sincere, am i really the only one you see

what do you mean when you say you're so very pretty
is that what you really think or are you just saying it out of pity

what do you mean when you say i never want to leave your side
are you just saying that, or are you saying it because it helps your pride

what do i mean when i say i love you
i mean you're my everything, and thats all i can do

what do i mean when i say you're the only one for me
i mean you are my one and only as far as i can see

what do i mean when i say you're so very handsome
i mean i'll love you no matter what, even if you turn into a bum

what do i mean when i say i'll never leave your side
i mean i'll never let you down because i know we'll be tested and tried

i mean what i say and thats the way it will be
you know, i things are going to work out for you and me!

*~We do not love because we are afriad of giving ourselves to someone we might lose-Morrie from Tuesdays with Morrie~*

[This message has been edited by fairy girl (edited 07-15-2001).]

Angelwings
Member

since 1999-08-27

Posts 222
IL, USA

1 posted 2001-07-15 02:11 PM

AWESOME! I think this poem is a truly remarkable explanation of the love you feel. I hope that you do keep with this relationship. It sounds pretty special to me. Thanks for sharing.

*that what does not kill us makes us stronger!*

*Everyone can deal with pain in their own way, some things are just harder than others!*

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

2 posted 2001-07-15 05:43 PM

Fair I really liked this one.
So simple. It gets your point across very clearly. The rhyming added a nice touch too.
I could relate to a few of those "what do you mean?" I enjoyed this. Thanks for the read.

pure_innocence
Member

since 2001-07-14

Posts 80
Colorado, US

3 posted 2001-07-15 07:18 PM

I loved it!!!! I can so completely relate!!!!!!! The message you wrote of so beautifully is real and blunt. Now if only the answers could be so quickly found. . . Thanks for sharing, keep it up!

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

4 posted 2001-07-16 03:43 PM

This was pretty good. I enjoyed the way your wrote in couplets. Nicely done, here. I enjoyed this

--Marie

You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds.

fairy girl
Junior Member

since 2001-07-14

Posts 10
*~*Virginia*~*

5 posted 2001-07-16 06:50 PM

thanks guys for the replies

it means a lot.

[This message has been edited by fairy girl (edited 07-16-2001).]

Angel Bee
Member

since 2001-01-30

Posts 176
Virginia

6 posted 2001-07-16 07:03 PM

I liked this poem. Good thoughts on the love you've found. keep writing. :o) ab

*~"Sometimes I wish I was a little girl again--because bruised knees heal faster than broken hearts."~*

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

7 posted 2001-07-18 11:42 PM

I thought your other one was better, but it was still fine.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

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