Teen Poetry #5 |
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Goodbye |
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since 2001-03-18
Posts 419 |
Goodbye" © 2002 Brian Eggertsen, All Rights Reserved Verse 1: You try to find, a way to say those words again. Because it don't take a genuise, to see what we had between us, ran away behind closed doors. But you keep saying it's OK, that it's alright. But something's seriously missing, There's nothing there when we're kissing, not a sparkle any more. Chorus: I feel it's time we say goodbye, this is a fight we're bound to lose. Because there's not a reason why, why we should go on like we do. The pain is building up inside, but you keep pushing it away. Because you think that there's a light, a basket full of hope one day. That is what you said yesterday, just wait and see tomorrow night. It will happen just as I say, But I think we should say goodbye. Verse 2: You keep digging, for something that's not even there. That feeling were lost long ago, back when we use to tell and show, chosen stories from our hearts. We said together, forever, and for always. Emotions once flew all around, now it's burried deep underground, gone over the hills so far. Re-Chorus: Bridge: I'm losing my concentration, losing peices of my world. I'm falling behind 'cause I'm chained, And it's all because of a girl. There were heat, there were passion once, but it went straight out the window. There were fire, great desire, but it burned out before the show. Re-Chorus: |
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Mon Cherie![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Wonder how the song sounds like, coz the lyrics seem great. It's quite sad though, to hear about a relationship going bad. Who should we blame? I guess there's no right or wrong either, coz it takes 2 to make a relationship work out. ![]() _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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kaile![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i like the lyrics...i think they are better thought-out than the lyrics of teen pop songs which deal with similar issues... The pain is building up inside, but you keep pushing it away. Because you think that there's a light, a basket full of hope one day. i liked these lines..it's hard to be assertive, yup? |
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