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Remebering
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babycakes304 New Member
since 2002-05-18
Posts 8 |
I remeber when you held me just like now your holding her. I remeber how you kissed me , exactly like your kissing that girl. It used to be me holding your hand and looking in your eyes. It used to be me laughing at your flirtey little lies. I remeber when you told me forever it will be me and you. I bet thats what your telling her, that you'll be together forever too. I wish that i could yell at you and tell you its not fair. You lied to me, like you lieng to her, pretending that you care. I hope she knows that soon you'll replace her with someone new. Then she'll be sitting here rembering with me too. hey just wanted to give you another poem that u may give me some comments on it thanks bunches! i am new here, so bare with me. |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
I liked your poem. Its was a nice read, its hard seeing someone you cared about with someone else, isn't it? well..keep smiling and writing. Regina |
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babycakes304 New Member
since 2002-05-18
Posts 8 |
Hey thans for replying, i was hopeing i would get atleast one reply from this one! It is really hard seeing someone you love with someone new! It sucks! lol Much love babycakes |
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songsoftheaftermath Member
since 2002-06-19
Posts 84a world of disarray |
the emotions within this SUCK! id hate it seeing an x of mine with someone else...on second thoughts i really wouldnt..but if i was in love with him i think i would- a LOT. i hope youve had time to heal. keep poeting! could the darkness be my friend? |
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