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You're Okay
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You're Okay |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden 
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Slowly. Quickly. Softly. Loudly. We all open ourselves sometimes to say the words we hear in our minds and make the mess a reality those words that play over and over and over over over again in our minds strangling all other thoughts until we're consumed with this idea that if we open our mouth and let the words tumble out maybe someone will care enough to say "you're okay". |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Somehow, I really understand this. I just, relate very well. You're really growing as a writer, great job.  Jenn "I can't get you out of my head- your love is all I think about." |
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Le Capitan de L'Amour Member
since 2000-07-15
Posts 60 |
That was nice, thanks for sharing your poem. |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Another good one, Allysa!!!! I totally understand the feelings here. Sometimes you keep everything bottled up, hoping that everything will work out in the end. But at some point, you need to let someone in on the secret, and hope that he/she will sympathise with you. _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
I really understand this one too. In a way i kno i've felt like this before..just waiting for someone to say to me that i was okay...great poem. Thanks for sharing iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf.. |
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