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LCsftball16
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0 posted 2002-05-14 05:27 PM


His loving eyes honeyed his words
Such words which tasted like pure sweetness
Such lips were like cotton candy
Soft, luscious (still as sweet as the first time I found them), so kiss-able…
Hands which pocketed my soul
Such hands bared calluses and discrete patterns
Life lines and love lines both intertwined
With my love lines and life lines
My heart savagely pounds as if a wild man is beating within.
Though I can only present the calm, “hard to get” act.
My passion for him evolved as the physical distance between us permanently silenced his honeyed words.
Forever pocketed my soul…
And yet I feel our life and love lines intertwining.
Still, his honeyed words--which still echo in my memories, will have everlasting silence.



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1 posted 2002-05-14 08:18 PM


Very nice!

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Some where over the rainbow
2 posted 2002-05-14 10:56 PM


I think it is good.Very Creative.

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3 posted 2002-05-15 11:28 AM


Awesome write LC..good job and keep em coming!

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

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