Teen Poetry #5 |
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What's Come Over Me? (please critique) |
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lauren03 Member
since 2002-01-04
Posts 64oh, usa |
I don't know what's come over me once again, here I am, asking myself if this could be true I'm not sure what I'm doing here Is this real? or will I feel another heart break? So far you've shown me all I've wanted for so long but could this be just another game some days I'm ashamed, for your his friend other days I'm ashamed to say I loved him but every night as I go to bed I feel so right no shame or hurt or quilt just a funny little feeling that has begun to overtake me could I possibly love you after all I've gone through I think it might be true....... all the days I cried all the nights I wanted to die only to find myself here with you so can I believe in what's come over me? |
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xShUgArHiGhx![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Sometimes i cant believe whats come over me either in certain situations...i guess we all doubt ourselfes. Everything happens for a reason..maybe its better not to wonder whats come over you bet just let what is happening to you happen. I enjoyed this a lot!! thanks for sharing this with us hun iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf.. |
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songsoftheaftermath Member
since 2002-06-19
Posts 84a world of disarray |
ahh..i can relate to this so well..i hope youve figured out your emotions by now...and that youre happy ![]() ![]() could the darkness be my friend? |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Just be happy you've found someone, and stop asking too many quetions. All that's gonna lead you to is confusion. Happy to see that you are happy again. là où est mon amour? |
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Skyfire![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
I can't say anything without repeating what the others have said, so other than saying thank you for the read, and good luck in your searching for answers, I must say that it is a good poem. ![]() |
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