I Hope You Know........ please give comments!!!

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Teen Poetry #5

I Hope You Know........ please give comments!!!

lauren03
Member

since 2002-01-04

Posts 64
oh, usa

0 posted 2002-05-05 10:15 PM

My quard I've let down
so you can come in
all my fear and anxiety let go
your so sweet with everything you say
you keep your word and promises too
everything I wanted seems to be coming true
if you wouldn't have came into my life where would I be
still so lost and broken hearted
even though your friends with him.........
you picked me up and helped me out
I think he sees this
and that's why he asks, if not then why should he care
I'm with you now.......
you make me happier than he ever did
maybe he's jealous, maybe he sees what he lost a year ago
but I won't let you down, I won't let you go
maybe I do love you, I'm still not sure but I do know this........
for the last year I've been so unhappy
in a few days you showed me it all would be okay
I'm done with him, your all I want
I hope you see this, I hope you know I won't let you down

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

1 posted 2002-05-06 01:40 PM

This was a really cute poem lauren!! Sounds like you got a great guy

Hope all works well with you 2 !!

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

2 posted 2002-05-07 09:48 AM

Sounds like you've found your man
Nice to see a happy poem in here once in a while

Thanks for sharing this personal write
I enjoyed the read a lot

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.

layla
Member

since 2000-11-19

Posts 74

3 posted 2002-05-07 03:19 PM

I think he does know, and im sure the other guy knows exactly what he lost, good poem!!!

tzaddiqim
Junior Member

since 2002-02-14

Posts 15

4 posted 2002-05-07 05:04 PM

Hope you know what your doing. i was the other guy, i lost my two best friends from it.

But i hope your happy. Its good to think maybe it was meant to be and that each end can lead to a beggining we hadn't even thought about.

Good Poem Though!

Jenn Cirrincione

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since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

5 posted 2002-05-08 12:45 PM

Live for today. Try not to think of what-ifs and what might not work... just be happy with the love in your heart today. Never regret, life will play out on its own. Happiness is what you make of it.

Nice job.

Jenn

"I can't get you out of my head- your love is all I think about."

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