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Lisa_bebe15
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since 2001-11-15

Posts 151
Florida

0 posted 2002-04-29 12:25 PM

Never do you think about the best day of your life.
You may say you have had the best day of your life
But It’s always getting better with just the next day.
Always hard to beat that certain best day.
Never do you think a day will last forever,
But always asking if it will.
Never wanting that day to end,
Always a better day the next day.
Comparing each new day to yesterday.
And never will you find,
That the next day will be worse
Then the last best day you had in your life.
Everyday has a new start,
A new meaning
So you don’t just have one best day of your life,
You have a new best day everyday
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Ok I have had writers block for this month. It won't go away. This is a school poem that I wrote for class today. I know it sucks.

"Water Over Matter"

xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

1 posted 2002-04-29 10:19 PM

It is so funny that you wrote a poem about this because i was just thinking last night about how i always say "omg this is the best day of my entire life!!!" When in reality everytime something amazing happens i say that so i wonder what actually IS the best day of my life..

Just interesting that you chose to write about this!! I liked it a lot!! Great poem and keep up the awesome work! it's nice to see you posting more often!

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

2 posted 2002-05-08 10:00 AM

I had to read it a couple times
It kinda felt like it went round and round
But the idea is there and is really good
just keep writing, you seem to enjoy it
that is what you need to grow in poetry
thanks for sharing

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.

Jenn Cirrincione

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since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

3 posted 2002-05-08 12:41 PM

I like the message here. Some people get so hyperbolic and overdramatic about having their "best day" it's silly.

Jenn

"I can't get you out of my head- your love is all I think about."

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