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lilibeelee
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since 2001-07-12

Posts 143

0 posted 2001-07-12 10:23 PM

Some say it without meaning
Some say it without a feeling
Some say it beacause they think its right
Love is blind it impares your sight
Why do you love me? no anwser cause you dont know
Why did you say, "I love you more then words can show?"
You never loved me you just said the 3 words of trust
You never loved me it was a confusion of lust
My heart is confused and so am I
I dont see how you can look at me and lie
You told me, "I love you and always will!"
But when you kissed her, did you love me still?
I love you are just meaningless words to you
You dont know what it takes to love,and you dont have a clue
You took my heart and broke it in two
My heart is broken, what do I do?
Lies of deseption, the hurt is still there
Anger and sadness, and you just dont care
Moving on is all i can do
I was a fool to ever belive you

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-07-12 10:53 PM

woo hoo! moving on is definately the right answer!! Strength my new poet friend

strength

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

2 posted 2001-07-13 02:31 AM

you choose right

...and your poems are VERY emotional...maybe thats why i liked them.

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

Shygirl82
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since 2001-02-19

Posts 245
Ilinois

3 posted 2001-07-13 04:01 AM

Well I am very glad you realized you will be better off without him and this poem was very very good and hit really close to home. I wish you nothing but the best of luck
~Nikki~

It takes only a minute to like someone, a hour to love someone, but a lifetime to forget them.

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

4 posted 2001-07-13 04:31 AM

You always feel better when you move on and stop dwelling on the past. Watch out for a few spelling errors and thanks for the read.

~AF~

GREMLINS ARE TRYING TO STEAL MY PANTS!!!!!!! *sobs*

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

5 posted 2001-07-13 04:22 PM

A very emotional piece. Like AF said- Watch out for spelling errors though. Anyway- I can really relate to this-I liked it alot. Great job.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

6 posted 2001-07-17 07:00 PM

I thought the message was pretty good. There's nothing to do from that point but to move on and plan for the future.
Good luck!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

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