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Allysa

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since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

0 posted 2001-07-12 04:05 PM

I get lost whenever I'm around you.
I can only find myself in your eyes.
The bluest blue I've ever seen,
you're a blue eyed angel in disguise.

I get lost whenever you're near me,
I can only find myself in your eyes,
the bluest blue I've ever looked at,
you're a blue eyed angel in disguise.

Someone once taught me that it doesn't matter what other people think of you as long as you like yourself. That's what I live by.

Angel Bee
Member

since 2001-01-30

Posts 176
Virginia

1 posted 2001-07-12 04:12 PM

I liked this...I look foward to seeing part II...keep writing. ~ab~

*~"Sometimes I wish I was a little girl again--because bruised knees heal faster than broken hearts."~*

Alyssa

Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 385
IM ENGAGED!!!!!

2 posted 2001-07-12 06:57 PM

awww this is cute, i cant wait to see part 2 either
hey sis, email me

"I wanna be bad"-willa ford

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

3 posted 2001-07-12 08:02 PM

beautiful discription...i really it..short but sweet

...hope to see part 2 soon.

[This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 07-12-2001).]

Shygirl82
Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 245
Ilinois

4 posted 2001-07-13 03:48 AM

Short but very beautiful...I can really relate to it...those blue eyes are hard to resist...cant wait for part two!
~Nikki~

It takes only a minute to like someone, a hour to love someone, but a lifetime to forget them.

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

5 posted 2001-07-13 04:29 AM

Nice one Allysa. You could make it longer but that'll all probably come in part 2.

Thanks for the read.

~AF~

GREMLINS ARE TRYING TO STEAL MY PANTS!!!!!!! *sobs*

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

6 posted 2001-07-13 04:18 PM

Not my favorite of your posts, but I liked it. I'll be keeping my eye out for part 2.

Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

7 posted 2001-07-13 04:28 PM

In case ya all don't know who this is for, it's for Justin. I've seen tons of hotties with the eyes so blue you wouldn't believe, but none of them are like him. He is my babyangel, I'm his babyangel, that's the way it's meant to be. i'll try to get the rest up here tomorrow, b/c I wrote it but it's somewhere and I have to find it and finish it. Yeah, it's longer, almost three hand written pages.

Someone once taught me that it doesn't matter what other people think of you as long as you like yourself. That's what I live by.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

8 posted 2001-07-17 07:04 PM

You're his babyangel?! Ooooooo!!!!!
I thought this one was ok Allysa. Not completely the best you've written, but still nice.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

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