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Allysa

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since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

0 posted 2001-07-12 04:03 PM

Whenever I'm around you,
all I want to do is touch you.
I just want to hold your hand,
or poke you in your side,
so you'll poke me back.

Whenever I'm around you,
i just want to touch you,
to just hold you close,
to rest my head on your shoulder,
to just be able to forget about everything.

Whenever I'm around you,
I just want to be closer to you,
to just walk next to you,
to just sit next to you,
to always be next to you.

Whenever I'm around you,
it doesn't seem to matter who else is there,
you still hold my hand even tho we broke up,
and you still let my head rest on your sholder,
and all the time I just want to touch you.

Someone once taught me that it doesn't matter what other people think of you as long as you like yourself. That's what I live by.

Angel Bee
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since 2001-01-30

Posts 176
Virginia

1 posted 2001-07-12 04:13 PM

i thought this was good. i can understand the thoughts put into it. keep writing. ~ab~

*~"Sometimes I wish I was a little girl again--because bruised knees heal faster than broken hearts."~*

Alyssa

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since 2001-05-30

Posts 385
IM ENGAGED!!!!!

2 posted 2001-07-12 06:56 PM

awww this is good sis
goodjob!

"I wanna be bad"-willa ford

destiny502
Member

since 1999-11-23

Posts 57
OH

3 posted 2001-07-12 07:44 PM

easy to relate to a poem like this..i like it i can dig it

Love can sometimes be like magic, but magic can sometimes..just be illusion

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

4 posted 2001-07-12 08:15 PM

^someones VERY shy...hehehe..

...anyways this poem had a very nice touch to it...i liked how you expressed your feelings...great job! Allysa

[This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 07-12-2001).]

Spice
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since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

5 posted 2001-07-13 02:35 PM

Yes. Someone IS very shy.

Allysa- I REALLY liked this. Like Destiny said- It's easy to relate to. I know the feelings all to well...

JBaker515

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since 2001-02-28

Posts 458
Dartmouth College

6 posted 2001-07-13 02:40 PM

this was good, i liked it....

pretty basic scheme, but overall well written.

~Jeff~

"Within you I lose myself
Without you I find myself
Wanting to be lost again."

Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

7 posted 2001-07-13 04:30 PM

It's like when I'm around him, I'll pinch him or something, just so I can feel the softness of his skin. He's so soft. I just want to melt into him. UGHH! It's discouraging sometimes.

Someone once taught me that it doesn't matter what other people think of you as long as you like yourself. That's what I live by.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

8 posted 2001-07-15 05:17 AM

You want to melt into him? That's such an awesome thing to say, that should be in a poem!
Allysa, good job on the poem. I liked it....sweet.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

9 posted 2001-07-16 10:51 AM

This really hit home for me. Breakups can be so hard, but don't you think that touching him, holding hands, etc. would make things worse for both of you? Like you're not going out anymore, but still have that bond. It's like you still have him without having him... very confusing. Anyways, I liked this poem. It's full of emotions. I really enjoyed this... nicely done!

--Marie

You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds.

Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

10 posted 2001-07-17 11:46 AM

Thanks you two!

Marie, I understand what your saying and where you're coming from. But with him, I'm gonna take WHATEVER i can get. It's taken a while *(a lonnnnngggg while) to get out of the post dating awkwardness and into the we're-not-dating-but-it-looks-that-way-to-everyone-else-except-us kinda thing. The holding hands, the hugging, the laying heads on shoulders kinda thing. As long as it's him, I'm fine. I don't care what me and him are, as long as we're something. My signature quote has to do with him (i think).

Someone once taught me that it doesn't matter what other people think of you as long as you like yourself. That's what I live by.

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