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Teen Poetry #5

A river of tears

TigerZ
Member

since 2002-01-02

Posts 83
Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2002-05-05 11:49 PM

Pain such as this ive never felt
Nothing physical can be compared to this
Regret has never been this much
Oh, how i wish i could take it back
You have won, cant you see?
Give me back my love and let me be!
Tears are falling in streams, slowly killing me
Happier than ive ever been when im with him
Please...just open your eyes
Look at what you're doing to me.

A life without love…is no life at all.

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

1 posted 2002-05-06 01:38 PM

This is so sad...to me while reading this i felt as if you were extending your hand for help..it really sounds like your struggling. You did a great job and you pacted a lot of emotion in that short poem. wonderfully done

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

TigerZ
Member

since 2002-01-02

Posts 83
Ontario, Canada

2 posted 2002-05-06 10:09 PM

=)thx for replying...it was just some thing i had last night when i was crying my eyes out. im over it now...and things are already looking better =)

A life without love…is no life at all.

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

3 posted 2002-05-08 09:57 AM

This is a really sad one
I just hope you be strong
Just give it time I guess
Hope things are well now
thanks for the read

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.

Mon Cherie

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since 2001-10-31

Posts 922
Land of Never-ending Summers

4 posted 2002-05-08 10:42 AM

There is much hurt in your words.
Pain from lost love can only be healed by passing time. Hope you'll pull through soon.

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

Jenn Cirrincione

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since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

5 posted 2002-05-08 12:38 PM

Very emotionally written.
I'm sorry for your pain.

Jenn

"I can't get you out of my head- your love is all I think about."

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