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*Nene* Junior Member
since 2000-03-15
Posts 16 |
I wrote this a couple of days ago after having a deep conversation with the guy I'm talking to. I wrote it in history and to me it sounds unfinished. Ya know, it's funny that it actually happened to me I never thought that love would find me so quickly I know that it got you first & came on strongly Don't think that I don't feel the same Trust, love got me Never felt this way before Everything is new But one think is for sure I no longer feel confused I am definite that my feelings for you are true And I'm sure that right now, all I want is you With you I never have to worry about being myself With you it would be a waste of time to think of anyone else I don't want you to ever regret expressing your feelings to me You're always upfront and that's how I want us to be Please don't mistake my silence for not feeling what you say Sometimes I get overwhelmed that toward me someone could feel that way |
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fearing-laughter Senior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 605land of cheese (Wisconsin) |
-nene- first of all, welcome to passions, it is always good to see new poets. this was a really great post, it doesn't seem unfished to me either. i like the way you brought it together at the end, thanks for sharing this one. it is a special piece. -bergundy- maybe i'll catch fire, something nice to warm me. something pure to burn away the darkness, that hides inside my mind. -alkaline trio- |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Your right, i agree that it sounds unfinished..maybe another line or two would finish it up nice. I hope everything works out with your new guy  Nice poem!!iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf.. |
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