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SunShine913

Member

since 2001-08-19

Posts 211
Italy but from NC

0 posted 2002-04-22 12:30 PM

Hurting Inside

The pain inside never goes away,
All day and night,
it always stays.
I've tried to run;
I've tried to hide,
Only to find it lives inside.
How do I rid myself of painIt's filling me up like a bucket,
in rain.
I'm tired of crying,
I'm tired of trying,
To stop the pain Pouring like rain.
Now I'm filled to overflowingThe hurt inside keeps growing.
What happens when I can't take anymore,
Will the pain come out like rain, and pour?
Or will it hide deep down inside,
Devouring me till my soul has died?
I'm tired of crying,I'm tired of trying,
To stop the pain inside my heart
That seems to be tearing my life apart.
What can I do to make the hurt stop
So I don't collect another drop.
What is the price I have to pay
To make the hurt go away.

*!~!* Andrea *!~!*

[This message has been edited by Read_what_i_write (04-22-2002 12:32 AM).]

PoetryIsLife

Senior Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

1 posted 2002-04-22 10:18 AM

Awww Andrea.

"What can I do to make the hurt stop
So I don't collect another drop.
What is the price I have to pay
To make the hurt go away."

Of it all, I thought the ending stuck out to me. It's actually kind of ironic you posted this. I was just fiddling around pip, and I wondered where you were. And the, BAM. You're right here.

If you care to, email me anytime you feel like you need to vent. *hugs*

Sincerely,
Titus

The ultimate measure of a man is not where he stands in moments of comfort and convinience, but where he stands at times of challange and controversy.

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

2 posted 2002-04-22 11:35 AM

This is usually how i feel so i completely understand. You expressed yourself well ::hugs:: hope you feel betta soon

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

See me?
Member

since 2002-02-13

Posts 93
UK

3 posted 2002-04-23 02:42 PM

This is how i feel all the time so i know what your going through, its so sad to see you write like this when your picture is soo happy, i hope you get over the heart ache.
God Bless
Clare

Life is about change,sometimes its painful,sometimes its beautiful,sometimes its both.

Sabriel.s.h.lover
Member

since 2001-04-16

Posts 73
b.f.e. aka- Hickville

4 posted 2002-04-27 09:05 PM

This poem is wonderful. It just sort of takes your breath away! Very nice...very nice!

CwboyAtHeart
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA

5 posted 2002-04-29 01:37 AM

Andrea! *hugs* I haven't talked to you in forever, I miss u.

I enjoyed the poem, well written, although sad. I know how you feel. Thanks for posting this, I hope to see you around here more.

      - Cody -

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If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?

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