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~*brittt*~
Member

since 2001-05-09

Posts 76
East Haddam, CT

0 posted 2002-04-19 06:15 PM

Hey guys, I haven't posted in so-o long!! I wrote this opem a little while ago but I liked it and I thought I would share it with you and see what you think, so lemme know!

*All I Know*

Secrets, lies, deception
The cycle never ends
It hurts to know that all of them,
Pretended to be my friends.

Circles of conspiracy
Betrayal, it all hurts
But to have trusted them and been let down,
That feeling is the worst.

Lyings all they do
Because everyones so fake
And so I begin to wonder,
How much more can I take?

Cryings become instinctive
Always feeling so alone,
But I can't bring myself to change it,
Cuz it's all I've evr known.

Demonic Illusion
Member

since 2002-02-07

Posts 50

1 posted 2002-04-19 07:59 PM

hey that was good ;o)

Demonic Illusions, Frostic Dragons, Bloody Tears From Me To You....all surround by a force of Untouchable Darkness

AliveAgain
New Member

since 2002-01-07

Posts 9
In the clouds

2 posted 2002-04-19 08:15 PM

this poem was so good and i think there are a lot of people that can relate to that. hang in there. keep writing.

dastard
Member

since 2001-07-14

Posts 55
in tearing silence

3 posted 2002-04-20 02:50 AM

.. I really can relate..

"Pain doesn't hurt when it's all you've ever felt" ~Marie, the girl of a thousand truths

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

4 posted 2002-04-22 11:37 AM

This is something like i would have written last year when i hated all my so called friends...one day you'll find true people who are your TRUE friends..not ones that will hurt you...you deserve the best and i hope you get that ::hugs::

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

corey14
Member

since 2001-05-23

Posts 89
Boston, Mass, U.S.A.

5 posted 2003-02-26 10:45 PM

its all good we all have been there cheer up have a new out lookout on everything I'll be your friend =)

live a little everyday and when its all over you will have lived a lot

i have one but i cant think of it

Barbara
Junior Member

since 2003-01-24

Posts 32

6 posted 2003-03-09 08:30 AM

really nice poem..

MeGaN_LoVeS_DaViD
New Member

since 2003-03-18

Posts 1

7 posted 2003-03-19 11:39 AM

I really liked your poem I can relate to it very much. You took the words right out of my mouth! Keep up the good work and never give up! You're a great writer!

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