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anya Member
since 2002-07-27
Posts 393London, UK |
Your fragrence is still hanging in the air, droplets of you in the atmosphere, I breath in, a lingering breath, imagining I am breathing you in, Your scent is still in my room, almost tangible, it makes it easy for me to trick my mind into believing you are here, memories, half-truths and tricks will just have to do, I just can't be without some form of you, And without your presence in my days everything seems routine, like I am now condemed to the mediocre things, and i seem to to spending more and more time putting re-runs of us on inside my head, and decieving myself that I am there, as I said before memories, after-thoughts and ghosts of us will just have to do, I just can not be without some form of you |
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EleanorMoonbaby Member
since 2002-09-02
Posts 202England, UK |
I liked this. Know the feeling! The idea of being able to fool yourself into believing that someone special is there just through their scent is great. Nice job! Eleanor :-) In the beginning, the Universe was made. This has angered a lot of people and has been widely regarded as a bad move- Douglas Adams |
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lilmissbabyteddybear Junior Member
since 2003-03-16
Posts 17Abilene, Texas |
Hey.. This poem really got to me..Im going through something alot like that.. It is hard..I liked it ALOT.. THank you for the Great Read..Jenny >>*:):(~+~+~JeNnYgOoD~+~+~:(:)*<< |
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