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0 posted 2002-04-13 12:48 PM


As Lucy and Jekyll,
we spin through the night,
veiled in red,
nothing to be said.

In a dream-like world,
electricity filling the air,
sensations enhanced,
alive with passion.

Together at last,
in this distant fantasy,
why can’t these feelings
flow through us
as they do for Lucy and Jekyll,
in my dream last night.



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1 posted 2002-04-13 01:36 AM


what a confusing dream for those on the outside looking in neat write though, makes me want to know more about the story of them......
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2 posted 2002-04-13 04:05 PM


great poem tks for sharing!
robin

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JEFF IS ONE HOT STUD *RAWR*
i want him *DROOLZ*
dam hes hott!!!

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3 posted 2002-04-14 11:04 PM


SOmetimes i really really wish that dreams could be reality. You expressed that thought well...good poem hun enjoyed it!

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

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