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Elvenblood
Member

since 2001-02-17

Posts 409
Maine, USA

0 posted 2001-10-27 09:03 AM

Take that mood…
Put our bodies together
And our lips a breath apart
That’s how I want to feel
Forever.

No angels in heaven nor demons below the sea, could ever dissever my soul from the soul of the beautiful Annabel Lee

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

1 posted 2001-10-27 11:13 AM

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! bryan..me too!...hey you know what?..this is a kick butt poem!...i really do think this is awesome...its going in my library

"......",said the wise mute.

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

2 posted 2001-10-27 04:52 PM

I like this one! Short but to the point! Thanks for the read!

Love me, because I am great (greater than Zu, anyway!)

Barelybreathing
Junior Member

since 2000-04-26

Posts 46

3 posted 2001-10-27 05:13 PM

I really liked this..It gave me a great feeling!!!awesome...

'The greatest thing in the world is to know how to be one's own.'
~Montaigne~

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

4 posted 2002-04-11 08:36 AM

*bump!*

The feeling of Sleepiness when you're not in bed, and can't get there, is the meanest feeling in the world.-- Edgar Waston Howe

PoetryIsLife

Senior Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

5 posted 2002-04-11 01:13 PM

Though the flow was a bit off, the poem was good. I liked how you chose the short, simple route... not always the one we take. "And our lips a breath apart" Pukka.

~
Titus

"Tesous Christos, Theou Uios, Soter"

CwboyAtHeart
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA

6 posted 2002-04-11 06:37 PM

Yeah... Good poem. I think it's something everybody wants. Unfortunately, it's not something I have. lol Never had... Never even close... Grrbrr. lol Anywho, I liked the poem, short but sweet. Nice job.

      - Cody -

Note To Self:  If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

7 posted 2002-04-13 04:09 PM

great poem tks for sharing!
robin

i am me don't tell me different!!
JEFF IS ONE HOT STUD *RAWR*
i want him *DROOLZ*
dam hes hott!!!

Suga_Baby
Member

since 2000-08-06

Posts 380
Maine, USA

8 posted 2002-04-14 10:49 PM

WOAH Bryan!! I never knew Jen was like that!!! Actually, I did, Ash and I interrogated her in the Virgin (how ironic!) Mega-store in NYC *muahahaha!!* So hey, I never ever reply anymore to like any poem in here, and yeah I wanted to be a pain in your caboose, but I liked this, too

It was pirdy