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Teen Poetry #5

i'll be gone

Deep_Inside
Member

since 2002-02-14

Posts 377
i can't stop hiding

0 posted 2002-04-12 02:35 AM

death behind me
I'm told life is ahead
thinks this
smoking in bed

fading away
my life is just fading away
it was stolen blindly
i don’t know what to say

it’s no longer
what i see
while trying to find bliss
they took it from me

my innocence is gone
more is going wrong
and lately people
have been swinging my song

don’t get attached
soon I'll be gone
don’t worry about me
it won’t be long

Thank you for your time :shy:

when you live you die
when you die your forgotten
when your forgotten you truly die

~*brittt*~
Member

since 2001-05-09

Posts 76
East Haddam, CT

1 posted 2002-04-12 05:03 PM

aw, this is sad, but i really like it! cheer up, it does get better!!
~britt~

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

2 posted 2002-04-13 04:07 PM

great poem tks for sharing!
robin

i am me don't tell me different!!
JEFF IS ONE HOT STUD *RAWR*
i want him *DROOLZ*
dam hes hott!!!

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

3 posted 2002-04-14 11:08 PM

This was a dark, deep poem which reveals a lot of your feelings...feelings unfortuntately i can relate to. But please...dont leave...tomorrow is another day and it may be scary..but its another chance to see if things are gonna be ok ::hugs::

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

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