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Briar Rose |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA 
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Lying upon crushed Rose petals Her breath grows rasp And nearly fatal Death lies upon her lips From the day she was Brought into the cruel wicked world Her beauty cursed Until her 16th birthday Only to be broken By one so valiant And one so pure Her eyes Grow heavier As her body Gets acquianted With eternal slumber Awaiting, pining For her true love Before it's too late And before The curse fully Seals her fate... |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
How fairy-tale-like!! I liked this a lot (as i do all of your other pieces) once again great job!! iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf.. |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
Kris, I see we are back to our fairytales *sighs* I'll talk to you tomorrow, and I love the poem...makes me think... ~Lisa To everything there is a season... |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Damn, very nice.  Very dark, and imagenative.  ~ Titus "My body is merely the canvas of my soul." |
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