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PoetryIsLife

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since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

0 posted 2001-11-02 03:30 AM

I struggle to grasp the truth,
as my mind flows to and frey.
Emotions become uncouth;
some would blush at what I wish to say.
My mind can’t handle the fact you’ll never be mine.
I rip up the roots of the vine
that my desire for you has become.
As the pain pricks endless at me; I become numb.
Never will our hearts beat as one!
The magnitude of it hits as I slowly am undone.
I rip out my hair; I beat on my chest.
I slip into murky darkness; it dawns on me - my life is a mess.
Sitting in my dungeon of despair,
I realize you, nor I, nor anyone does care.
As I wish to end it once and for all,
I grasp quite gravely - you already have.

Daniel Redding
10/29/01

PoetryIsLife

Senior Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

1 posted 2001-11-02 03:32 AM

I think I posted this once before in "Open Poetry #1?" but for the life of me, I can't find it! It's one of my favorite poems ever, and I wanted to share it with you all in here. If I did post it, and some of you replied, I'm so sorry!

*I have blond roots*

Again, it's important to me, as you are, so.. here it is.

Sincerely,
Titus

[This message has been edited by PoetryIsLife (edited 11-02-2001).]

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

2 posted 2001-11-02 11:29 AM

Nice job...enjoyed this one..keep it up!

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

Skyfire

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since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

3 posted 2001-11-02 04:00 PM

Thanks for sharing! Very heartfelt and emotional! Yay for you!

~I am a computer genius... Hey! How do you turn this thing on?!?

~Love me because I am Rhonda

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

4 posted 2001-11-03 12:44 PM

Wow...

The ending kicked major tooshie.
So sad....My heart sunk...It was horrible...Ecspecially when read slowly and quietly...Man...Awesome effect.
Anyway, the poem was absolutely outstanding...I loved it.. More I say! MORE!

Every now and then I like to stick my foot in my mouth...

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-03-31 12:37 PM

(big hugggsssssss) I think we can all relate to experiences like these, sweet friend, before I felt no one in the world loved me until a few years ago when I met someone who got me to start writing then finding everyone here and meeting my dream girl Joanna and wonderful friends like you! (sigh) Know you are always loved by many, sweet friend, we all love you so much, God Bless You! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Daniel, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

PoetryIsLife

Senior Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

6 posted 2002-04-01 04:20 PM

Spice...

Noah, thank you.

~ Titus

"My body is merely the canvas of my soul."
~ The Night Owl

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