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Tears of Corruption |
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PoetryIsLife 
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... 
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Take all of me, please let it be. Less and less of my selfish, more and more of the wealth, all that is You, all that is true. I give up me, please let me see. I'm just a passing story, this life is for Your glory. Every day I see the Sacrificial Tree, and see Your love beyond degree. Your grace for me can it be? Tired of all that I am, sick of obsession with this man. The tears of corruption, on my knees, pleading supplication. How can You notice me? Every day I plea, all that You are, we could never cross that bar, please help me understand, I am Yours, for You I stand. On one knee, now both bent they be. All of You, only then can joy be true. Tears of joy flow on and on, my heart Your hand is on. Every day, pick up my cross, otherwise this life is loss. Tomorrow I will do it anew, for You, anything I'll do. For You love us, and deserve our full trust. Amen. [This message has been edited by PoetryIsLife (03-29-2002 11:33 PM).] |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Yet another amazing piece by u Ti  Enjoyed as always..keep em coming!iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf.. |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
I absolutely love this, and it fits the time of year to perfection. Thank you so much for posting this I really am inspired by it. Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial) |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
I'm normally not into God-loving poems and such, but the way you wrote it made it very real and interesting. You took a basic concept and made it very personal. I like it a lot. Cela passera. |
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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
this is good, i liked it up until the "amen" but thats just me i'm not religious. |
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laconic Member
since 2002-02-17
Posts 64Melbourne, Australia |
wow, very uplifting. Thanks for the words on this Easter Sunday. Happy Easter PoetryIsLife |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) I must confess that I have never been to this forum before, but I just had to stop by and read this wonderful poem of yours! (big hugggssssss) I too always can't help but weel when I look upon the Sacrificial Tree and think of His anguish that cruel men gave Him, but I know that somehow He wished to endure it to save us all and feeling His absolute love, I too will always be His with you and pay homage to Him! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is absolutely touching, have the happiest Easter, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Daniel, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Thanks everyone. This poem is my prayer every morning, not the exact words, per say, but the feelings and emotions. I'm glad you all enjoyed it. ~ Titus "My body is merely the canvas of my soul." |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
Shoot. It seems that I'm a day late for this one. Oh well. It was good anyway. Good to see you Titus!  Ah, screw the grin. *hugs Titus* Bye all! Kielo *runs away scampering like a little leprechaun* (I know I spelled that wrong... so what?) |
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