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krystlebabe19
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since 2001-11-09
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0 posted 2002-03-27 10:35 PM



Your unbelievably perfect

In every consivable way

What I would do to be with you,

For just one single day

Iv'e never meet anyone like you in my life befor

So please give me a chance befor walking out the door

I promise I'll make it worth it, I'll give you all
I am, and all I have

You don't understand how I feel, but I know this
this time it's gonna last

      
              By~Krystle

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Kielo
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since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109

1 posted 2002-03-28 02:48 PM


Nicely done. Be careful not to give too much of yourself away, and good luck!
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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs
2 posted 2002-03-28 06:00 PM


Your clearly experessing your feelings loud and strong...sounds like a wonderful guy!! Hope everything works out for the best!

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

inspiredpoetwriter
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since 2002-01-05
Posts 104
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3 posted 2002-03-30 02:20 PM


:smile:Hey that's really good :smile:
keep it up:angel:


-Inspired-

¥¤¥¤¥¥¤¥¤¥iM a PoEt WhO wRiTeZ Wit HeR Heart ¥¤¥¤¥¥¤¥¤¥

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