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Spare Me |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA 
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You seriously Don't expect me To sit here And listen to your non-chalant words Of how you Assume you have control Over my heart Please, spare me Your junvenile ways Trust me, Sweetheart Manipulation isn't going to get you anywhere You can't slander me Or even bring me down Because, honey It's going to be you Who leaves this one horse town There just isn't enough Room for the both of us So go on Better get ready to pack your bags Because I'll make sure It's my strength that blows you away... |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
Kris this is really good.... It shows that you are strong, and strength is a GREAT quality to have... Good Write, talk to you on Monday!, ~Lisa |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Excellent powerful poem, and you go girlfriend!  ~* Sharon *~ |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
AWESOME!! Ahhhh you tell em!!! Great post...awesome!! im turning into your biggest fan  iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf.. |
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Cinderelly Member
since 2001-12-31
Posts 189NM, USA |
"It's going to be you Who leaves this one horse town There just isn't enough Room for the both of us So go on Better get ready to pack your bags Because I'll make sure It's my strength that blows you away" I really like these lines . . . Great poem! Life is a moderately good play w/ a badly written thrid act. - Unknown |
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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
this is awesome, i love the power in it. |
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