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Teen Poetry #5

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Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

0 posted 2002-03-29 04:22 PM

I've ran this
Labrynthe before
I've even spiralled down
This dark abyss
Even relived your blood laced kiss
A hundred thousand times a day
Yet the stabbing pain
Does not linger long enough
To rob my sanity
Instead I just try to run away
But my legs
At times seem
To be caught up
Within a spider web
Of useless memories
Trying to shackle and chain
Me to the disillusionment
Of your illusive enchantment
How stupid could I have
Actually been
To have the nerve
To believe
That someone like you
Could have ever actually
Loved me...

Android 18
Member

since 2002-02-20

Posts 61
Austrailia (My DreamLand)

1 posted 2002-03-29 05:37 PM

Beautifully done, yet very sad poem.

~*~Serena~*~

LCBS
Senior Member

since 2001-11-29

Posts 532
Connecticut

2 posted 2002-03-29 09:53 PM

This was really good kris...I'd say my usual thing but you have heard it all before....

Talk to you on Monday....hope you are havin fun with your friend *winks and makes various hand symbols*

~Lisa

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

3 posted 2002-03-30 12:14 PM

Beautifully written but very sad...i love how you express yourself!! Great job

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

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