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Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

0 posted 2002-03-25 04:09 PM

Will you lead me outside when it's raining?
Can we puddle jump together?
I want to run around, soping wet with you.
Dance around in the rain and not care.
Will you grab me by the hand
and pull me out of second period?
Let's go and dance on the football field,
who cares if we get caught.
I just want to dance in the rain with you.
Your hair hangs in your eyes,
our glasses are streaked with raindrops,
our clothes stick to our skin
as we dance in the rain.
Together.

Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

1 posted 2002-03-25 07:12 PM

This was a nice poem Allysa. very light, have fun puddle jumping.

Regina

LCBS
Senior Member

since 2001-11-29

Posts 532
Connecticut

2 posted 2002-03-25 07:31 PM

oooo I liked this....I wrote a poem like this, I love dacing in the rain...Now you have my day dreaming...

~liSA

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

3 posted 2002-03-26 02:20 PM

Ahh the feeling of freedom and not caring is the best feeling in the world...i hope you get to experience that with the person you want to

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

keoni
Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 850
Up in the mountains in the NFC

4 posted 2002-03-27 12:42 PM

Wow, I totally liked this one. I really need that person in my life right now. I hope you have your's...
Jon

"Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur
"Sometimes it takes a painful loss to realize you are free"- Bouncing Souls

fearing-laughter
Senior Member

since 2001-04-24

Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)

5 posted 2002-04-06 03:09 AM

aww this was a really sweet poem that brought a smile to my face. thank you for sharing it.
-bergundy-

maybe i'll catch fire, something nice to warm me. something pure to burn away the darkness, that hides inside my mind. -alkaline trio-

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

6 posted 2002-04-06 08:34 AM

I actually got to dance in the rain...once

when you get the chance, do it.

The rain is magic, thank you for this one

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

7 posted 2002-04-18 04:20 AM

Allysa-
I absolutely LOVE this!
I love the rain, and I can't resist going
out in it. This paints a very sweet and
romantic picture.
Wonderfully done!
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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