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mistic
Member

since 2001-05-06

Posts 233
Idaho, U.S.A.

0 posted 2002-04-07 01:31 PM

ok this is actually a double poem. Each line on both sides of the ~ can be read as a seprate poems going down and together as a single poem when read across. sorry if it may be a bit hard to read

Dreams are cursed throught the night ~ Seeing nothing but blue
Brought on by visions seen in the light ~ Where everything rolls into view
Taking over every thought ~ Finally surrendering in the end
Though one could say the battele was hard fought ~ But becomes a game of pretend.
Cursed or blessed ~ Enjoyment sometimes brought.
And occasionally missed ~ When the forbidden images are sought.
Seen through the eyes of few ~ Understood by less
Always tormented until the morning's hue ~ Usually creating in one's head a confused mess.
When friends close at hand ~ Learn of the pleasing torture
Grow larger than the land ~ And become tempted by its lure
Fears and yet pleasures can be found ~ Much like a golddigger's find
Always to these dreams will the present and future be found ~ Never to be erased or ignored in the memories of one's mind.

LCBS
Senior Member

since 2001-11-29

Posts 532
Connecticut

1 posted 2002-04-07 07:17 PM

wow...I lvoe the poem and the message...but the format was unusual and thought provoking! I LOVED IT!

Good Job
~Lisa

CwboyAtHeart
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA

2 posted 2002-04-07 07:29 PM

Wow. Good message and very well written. -stops my head from spinning- How the heck do u write like that? Too much goin on for me, havin' like 3 separate poems goin at one time. Good job.

      - Cody -

Note To Self:  If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

3 posted 2002-04-08 01:34 PM

Awesome format!! Very creative

I enjoyed this read a lot..it flowed nicely!

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

4 posted 2002-04-18 04:24 AM

mistic-
Great write!
You have quite a talent and I'll be looking
for more of your work.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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