Teen Poetry #5 |
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Cerulian Dreamscape |
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mistic Member
since 2001-05-06
Posts 233Idaho, U.S.A. |
ok this is actually a double poem. Each line on both sides of the ~ can be read as a seprate poems going down and together as a single poem when read across. sorry if it may be a bit hard to read Dreams are cursed throught the night ~ Seeing nothing but blue Brought on by visions seen in the light ~ Where everything rolls into view Taking over every thought ~ Finally surrendering in the end Though one could say the battele was hard fought ~ But becomes a game of pretend. Cursed or blessed ~ Enjoyment sometimes brought. And occasionally missed ~ When the forbidden images are sought. Seen through the eyes of few ~ Understood by less Always tormented until the morning's hue ~ Usually creating in one's head a confused mess. When friends close at hand ~ Learn of the pleasing torture Grow larger than the land ~ And become tempted by its lure Fears and yet pleasures can be found ~ Much like a golddigger's find Always to these dreams will the present and future be found ~ Never to be erased or ignored in the memories of one's mind. |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
wow...I lvoe the poem and the message...but the format was unusual and thought provoking! I LOVED IT! Good Job ~Lisa |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA |
Wow. Good message and very well written. -stops my head from spinning- How the heck do u write like that? Too much goin on for me, havin' like 3 separate poems goin at one time. Good job. - Cody - |
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since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Awesome format!! Very creative ![]() iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf.. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
mistic- Great write! You have quite a talent and I'll be looking for more of your work. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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