Teen Poetry #5 |
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Toothpick and Dillybar |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA ![]() |
Hey again! This is one that really has no point to it... It's kinda a song I guess... Me and my friend were walking, and she's like, small, and I'm like... not. lol But we were walking, and she was having trouble walking so I'm like, "Want me to carry you?" and she's like, "Nah, want me to carry you?!" Anywho... That's where this came from, just so ya have a bit of an idea. O, if ya don't know what a dilly bar is, it's one of those round ice cream things from dairyqueen... Anywho, lemme know what you think. ![]() TOOTHPICK AND DILLY BAR A toothpick and a dilly bar Were walking one day The dilly bar offered to carry her Here's what the toothpick had to say "No, I think I'm doing good But if you have any trouble I'd carry you if I could ...Or at least I'd try" They laughed it off And they joked around They just couldn't get over Just how funny that did sound "No, I think I'm doing good Bit if you have any trouble I'd carry you if I could ...Or at least I'd try" It really would be funny A toothpick carrying a dilly bar But I don't really think That they would get very far - Cody - |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
ROFL@this: "Me and my friend were walking, and she's like, small, and I'm like... not. lol" *ahem* sorry that cracked me up ![]() Loved the comparison of the dilly bar. Cute poem/song! Keep em comin. ..tiff.. “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
LoLoL very interesting cody!!! very interesting... iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf.. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Cody- I love Dillybars, and I LOVE these little ditties you're coming up with! Too funny! Keep 'em coming! ![]() Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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