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quietlydying
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the wonderful land of oz

0 posted 2002-03-24 06:49 PM


i found this quickly scribbled in red ink on a loose scrap of paper in my dresser drawer today.

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i cringe as
the music burns
my ears
            and i wonder
when you'll
love me again.


/jen/


so foul and fair a day i have not seen.  - macbeth act 1, scene 3

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LCBS
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1 posted 2002-03-24 09:15 PM


pretty good for scribbles....

Isnt it Gwen?

~Lisa

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2 posted 2002-03-24 09:55 PM


either or.

i don't mind.

somedays i feel like gwen, others i feel like jen.

::scratches her back with a pen every now and then, with her hen::

/gwen jen pen hen then men den zen/

so foul and fair a day i have not seen.  - macbeth act 1, scene 3

Cinderelly
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3 posted 2002-03-24 10:47 PM


Great sort write!

Life is a moderately good play w/ a badly written thrid act. - Unknown

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